Treatment Pitching (Feedback)

Through our pitching we gained constructive feedback.
Some of the feedback helped us improve our initial ideas and others helped us figure out potential problems which is a positive as we can overcome the problems.
Feedback;
"Dont use condom, as it would be excess and wouldn't really be needed as the message is clear"
Gaining this feedback meant we had to re-think wether props such as condoms should be used as the lyrics are obvious enough regarding the use of a condom.
"Get the right actors"
We are planning to do auditioning for getting our correct actors who will fit the characters perfectly.
"The ideas are quiet ambitious"
We was aware that from the beginning that we are going to carry out ambitious and creative ideas. Regardless of the feedback, we are still aiming to go ambitious and ensure that we complete all the effects and ideas we propose to do so.
"Why did you choose that song?"
At first we was unclear of what song to use as we planned to use a female and male actor. We wanted to send a positive message via the song so we choose this song as it would also appeal to the younger generation as they are the future for tomorrow.
"What about the risks?"
We are aware that there could be risks as we propose to use a rooftop, however we plan to get permission from the local authority or a person who can give us the permission needed to film and occupy the rooftop.
"Overall the ideas are good"
We had positive feedback adn we believe we can carry out what we propose to.